Thursday, May 11, 2006


A tenor sax solo,
this moonlight on our still twined bodies.


Blogger Julie Carter said...

I have a suggestion for this shortie short: Line break after "still"?

6:12 PM  
Blogger Hedgie said...

Sounds good to me. Anything that'll help. I feel like my imagination's playing out. *sniff*

6:44 PM  
Blogger Julie Carter said...

It just needs suckerpunched. That'll learn it!

6:57 AM  

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