Friday, May 26, 2006

"Berrying"

Just at sunrise, the dew
in the bramble bush
looks like the Pleiades
come down to pick blackberries.

2 Comments:

Blogger Cookala said...

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7:02 PM  
Blogger Cookala said...

oooh, you should rearrange the line breaks in this into a, "Everything depends on a red wagon" type poem, the shortness and wording are a good match, I think.

7:03 PM  

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